Hidden Escape
Hidden Escape
Your sweet voice in my ear
The soft touch of your hand
I close my eyes
And the storm seems to fade
Nothing matters anymore
Because you’re by my side
You promise no harm
And a reason to smile
No need for tears
And fears can disappear
You’re the escape that I needed
The one that’s been hidden away
I’ve searched for so long
And I’ve finally found you.
8-21-07
posted by katie at 9:54 PM
1 Comments:
Um, might I sugest rewriting the second to last line. It doesn't go with the line before it, and that really throws off the rhythm.
"The one that's been hidden away
the one I've searched for so long"
??
Something like that. I'm not exactly sure, but, I know that line has to change.
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